Hey it’s a good story and I’m glad your writing about it. This topic isn’t written enough about. Humble advice, I got real distracted while reading it with all the other stories you linked every 2 paragraphs. It honestly made it hard for me to keep reading. The links were really relevant, but it made it hard to follow. I would recommend limiting links to other stories to no more than five per story. Ideally three or less is best, but five as an absolute max.