Finding errors in other people's work helps me improve my own work! I have dyslexia, and it can be a real struggle finding spelling and other errors. So finding other people's work helps me because I'm not as emotionally attached. In all honesty, I have to say a lot of your sentences are worded rather awkwardly. I know your opinion isn't very popular, but I think your grammar isn't helping you get your point across very well. If you smooth out your sentences a bit here and there more people will probably take what you have to say more seriously. That's important when writing about such an un-popular topic on a platform such as medium that has a lot of feminist writing on it. In all honestly, I struggled with focusing on what your article was about because I was so distracted by the grammar. It's not a point I agree with per say, I find arguing with you about the concepts futile. But I do like such discussions because I see another point of view, and I value that in my everyday life. So I like your article because you did write about an intersting topic. I don't share your opinion, but it was very hard to stay focused due to your grammatical errors. I couldn't help myself, I had to correct them. They just popped off the page like candy in a tofu-spread.